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    Comments On Danny Green's Pasta Sue Rants Part 3

    Post by Ocean Elf on Tue Jun 20, 2017 2:47 pm

    Continuing on from Danny Green's critiques part 2, feedback comments part 1 and 2.

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    CorgiNovember 20, 2013 at 7:10 PM

    I just wanted to say thanks, you probably don't care but you pointed out a lot of flaws that needed to be fixed and they will be and with every character. I get it, you are just being harsh but in the end you did give a lot of valid points.

    I was stupid and you know, got butthurt, but none of that matters now! They are old characters, the stories were crap and a lot of it, didn't make any braying sense. If you guys were to you know tone it down with insulting the artist maybe you would make a bigger impact on us as a whole and make us realize how stupid some of these characters really are.

    This is the first time I was harshly reviewed so I didn't take it kindly, but thanks man. I will be changing if not all of their stories and designs to make it fit into the creepy pasta fandom. I am sorry for all of this stupid bullcrap people are spewing at you, it is partially my fault, there's no such thing as "bad publicity"

    no hard feelings and thanks for the eye opening review,

    Corgi

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM

    Your logic is broken beyond belief. First of all, they're critics. IT'S WHAT THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO DO. Also, they do have a life. People with "no life" have no friends, fail to interact with anyone other than themselfs and are just generally unable to do anything with others.

    - Mr. Eleven

    AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 11:21 PM

    What ignorance.

    You're nearly pitiful wasting time doing nothing.

    It isn't doing anything, these "insults" you put up on your blog.

    Some people take offence but they shouldn't, it keeps idiots like this running.

    The way you insulted "Emos" is revolting and you should be ashamed. You get over half of your info wrong, and what you get 'right' is either uselessly hurtful or painfully triggering. Or it could be stupid stories of your life no one but you cares about.

    Tisk tisk. I hope you know that you are a scourge on life and that you represent the bad parts of life and humanity.

    Im not even trying to be hurtful this is the daunting truth.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 4:21 AM

    What's the difference between a dead baby and an emo?

    The baby doesn't cry.

    RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    Wow. That's so offensive..

    Just like the prats above which even braying suggested suicide.

    I lost hope in humanity, thanks Razz

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:41 AM

    Do all of us a favor Whyfags crew, delete this piece of crap you called a "blog" and go do something what you all are SUPPOSE to do. Just do us this one favor and we don't have to see your idiots bashing on people's OCs ever again.

    AnonymousMay 29, 2014 at 4:37 AM

    Are you speaking for the whole of mankind. because I personally love their blog and would hate to see it taken down. And what the he|| are they "supposed" to do? That's the stupidest thing I have ever heard. The only people who want this blog down are the morons who don't understand criticism. People who think everyone should be praised for everything they do even if it's crap, a little exercise for everyone who thinks this way. Imagine all the T.V. shows and movies that were so terrible, they basically disappeared from the face of the planet, now imagine if everyone 'said' those things were amazing. So now, instead of terrible ideas dying out and fading away, developers would see how well it's doing and make a similar movie... thus continuing the udder garbage that the last was. People who draw won't get better if you tell them everything they do is perfect because they won't see need for improvement. Criticism is good.

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:55 AM

    What they're supposed to do? You mean critisizing bad fancharacters?

    - Mr. Eleven

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 7:11 AM

    Nice post, as usual, but where did all the maggots suddenly come from?

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 8:23 AM

    Apparently the person who was reviewed is "Famous"

    So, probably white knights.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:35 PM

    Jack fistus, why don't I get to be famous for dropping giant heaps of crap?

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:33 AM

    I like how they assume you have no life when they have no idea who your are irl. I guess they dont like you kissing their queen bee's ass. Aww too bad. Lol this is the internet, expect stuff like this to come. You dont like it? GTFO! Or grow a back bone. Lol all these butthurt maggots.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:48 AM

    The one thing people don't understand is that they are not brayin' perfect. Having so many dumb freaks ready to smash anyone who said a bad thing about them doen't help either.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:25 PM

    If they WANT to have their OCs reviewed, they should have asked for it. But, they don't want them to be reviewed because sometimes they'll look back on it and remake them to make them look better.

    But these guys chose to bash OCs for the fun of it and make the artists feel bad and quit the fandom they really love. You have no idea what's it like to have OCs get bashed. You have NO idea, Anon. Neutral

    So, why don't you shut the bray up and stop praising these lowlife Whyfag writers? They have nothing better to do in their life and trying to be all popular. Idiot.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:21 PM

    Lmao in fact I do know what it's like to have my OC bashed Smile Lol I looove how you all pretend to know who it is behind the screen when really you don't. If anything you're the idiot because you pretend to know things you don't. WOWIE ZOWIE did I hit a nerve sweetheart? Aww I must've because you're attacking me pretty hard.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:34 AM

    *not kissing

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:45 AM

    This is a hamgod demn waist of time you made corgi want to change her OCs OR EVEN QUIT WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU EVEN brayING DO THAT?! i know that you will find my other DA account with my OC myki but... he is not a CP so you can go suck a doorknob. you braying maggot...

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:52 AM

    "Waist of time" hahaha, lol.

    Yeah, as they should do.

    And why the he|| not?

    No one gives a crap about you, really. You're not perfect nor the most important person here so please shoosh.

    ...Why do I get the feeling you just want your character reviewed here..?

    There are literally only two posts about creepypasta characters, what the bray is wrong with you?

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:21 PM

    Hey Anon, why don't you shut your pie hole? The artist put her heart and soul onto her OCs and the arseholes of WhyFags bashed her OCs for the he|| of it.

    I know everyone else don't give a crap about you because you probably don't have any friends and you ain't worth crap. So, don't tell her that no one gives a crap about her because I am pretty sure that no one gives a rat's patuty about you, SWEETY. Don't even tell her she's not perfect nor important because I'm also pretty sure that you're NOT perfect (which is true) nor important.

    So with all do respect, please buzz off and go (perverted suggestion deleted.) Thank you.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    That's a waste of heart and sould, then.

    And that's braying right. I don't have any friends. You wanna know why? Because bray if I want to have anything to do with those dumbarses. And I was talking about you, anon, not "her", whoever that is. Don't call me "sweety", you piece of bray. Call me a dumb braying boring piece of crap, but don't braying call me "sweety". And what. What will you do if I will call "her" a not perfect person, huh? All you know about me is that I'm an anon. Like many other anons on the Internet. "She" is NOT perfect and never will be. blast you.

    Furry porn is disgusting and you are disgusting for even suggesting it. No respect for you. I worship the ground that awaits your corpse.

    ~Patheticarsehole Anon

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:32 PM

    Hey retard? You got the WRONG Anon. So, I have no idea what the bray you're referring to me for, SWEETY.

    I see why you have no friends because of your crappy attitude and you probably have no respect for anyone, but yourself.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 7:50 AM

    Actually you can't see why I have no friends. And no. I have less respect for myself than for you. Because you're a piece of bray. So am I. Now shut up.

    RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    -AHEM AHEM-

    Let me just start this..

    Blast you.

    Okay, now to the more IMPORTANT bits..

    -You Suggested Suicide..

    -You MOCKED people's OCs which they are PROUD of..

    -You simply "look-mom-i-finally-dont-give-a-bray" this whole page..

    -...IT'S A mega-blastING OC. DON'T MAKE A DEAL OUT OF CHARACTERS PEOPLE MAKE.

    On the last one you may say to yourself "Oh that wench doesn't know nuthin, why does she make a big deal out of the commenting section etc blahblahblahblah im braying awesome" And then snort like a braying pig..

    I make a big deal not because I know the people and LOVE their OCs, they might not be perfect.. or even far from perfect, but at least let people enjoy doing what they want. It's a free world, there's homosexuals, transexuals, people who love animals more than humans sometimes.. People who believe in religions.. Seriously, just stop before you do some REAL damage to the humanity..

    Thanks.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:29 AM

    That made as much sense as me when I'm not drunk. Which means none.

    AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:01 PM

    You actually start off with an insult. That's a sign you're irritated about it and hating on this blog. And even if you're trying to make a point, there is always someone to prove that you're wrong. It might be a free world, but some people have their limits.

    - Mr. Eleven.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:33 AM

    Everyone go home, for bray's sake, you're not gonna change anything with your whining.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    Hey hey Anon? Shut up. No one cares about what you think. =_=

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:26 PM

    Hey, hey, guess what? No one cares about what you think either.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:27 PM

    Of course not, because you idiots are careless and enjoy laughing at others. =_= So, shut the bray up.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:12 AM

    and that means we never cease to be amused Very Happy More fun for us!

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    Well i care. I care about how accurate that comment was that you made, Anon A.

    - Mr. Eleven

    braynuggetsNovember 20, 2013 at 2:07 PM

    GET YOUR EXCITEMENT HERE! COME ONE COME ALL TO THIS RAGE IN THE COMMENT CAGE!!

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:04 PM

    someone needs to go suck a thermometer for money, i thought that link was hilarious

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:00 PM

    WHY THE bray CAN'T WE ALL JUST SHUT UP AND (suggestion deleted?)

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:04 PM

    KISS ME YOU FOOL!

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:05 PM

    i need a bag of popcorn, and a video camera

    AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:04 PM

    And a whip, maybe?

    - Mr. Eleven

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:24 PM

    I like how all see guys say you're bullies but they're acting worse than you all are. Very Happy Lmao "OH MAH hamGAWD YOU'RE CYBER BULLIES!!! YOU brayING mAGGOTS blast U!!!11" Lmao yeah and you're the cyber bullies.

    CorgiNovember 20, 2013 at 7:04 PM

    Seriously, this needs to braying die! What the literal bray is wrong with all of you? Are you trying to prove a point? It's pointless, what's done is done, I braying moved on.. and you know, WhyFags; thanks for stating all of the flaws my characters had..they were pretty old and they do need to be revamped; which I am now..so I'm thanking you guys (could have been a bit nicer, but you know people are arseholes now a days so I will just have to deal with it)

    No crap I was hurt in the beginning, would you not be if you were in MY shoes? Saying I can't draw (because I'm actually not crazy good at realism and that's not going to change so that doesn't phase me!) These characters were rushed and poorly done..nor am I crazy about grammar because you know people have flaws and strong points (if you didn't know that well I question your logic)

    I never wanted all of this stupid crap, and I am sure posting this I will end up getting hate replies but you know.. bray YOU I DON'T CARE WHAT KIND OF BULLcrap YOU HAVE TO THROW AT MY FACE, I ALREADY HAVE HAD ENOUGH!! SPARE YOUR BREATH, BECAUSE YOUR OPINION DOESN'T MATTER TO ME!! Smile

    So seriously thanks guys. I was stupid about it and you know, nobody is perfect so I am fixing my flaws on them as a whole and from now on.

    HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 2:09 AM

    Oh look! A mature person amidst the mindless rabble! <3

    Good for you taking that attitude! Best of luck to you! Smile

    CorgiNovember 21, 2013 at 2:38 AM

    Haha, I wasn't so accepting at first (mainly due to all the hate towards me and the bad mouthing) resulting in me being butthurt... but in the end they did have very valid points and finally getting over all that negativity and focusing on improving my characters to better not only myself but even the characters I create in the future!

    so thank you, also for being one of the most considerate person on here...from my eyes are viewing all of this hate, god damn it really saddens me to see how low people get against one another..

    but, it's time for me to retire from this site.

    have a nice night.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:46 AM

    The funny part is, they didn't hate on you, they hated on the characters, and I think that's something most of these anons who didn't even read the post miss.

    The Character, is not the Person.

    They may feel attached to them, but it would be the same as saying every time someone doesn't like the new starwars films, they are hating on George personally.

    AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 8:12 PM

    YOU POOR EXCUSE FOR A HUMAN BEING!!!!!! TRASHING PEOPLE HARD WORK THAT THEY TOOK THE TIME TO MAKE IT PERFECT!!!!(talking about you trashing my creepypasta family) ID LIKE TO SEE YOU DO BETTER, BECAUSE YOU JUST CRUUSHED SOMEONES HARD WORK ALL BECAUSE THEY DIDNT MEAT YOUR LIKING!!!! SHOULD I SMACK YOU ACROSS THE FACE OR SICK THE CREEPYPASTAS CHARACTERS AFTER YOU?!?!?!!? YOUVE MESSED WITH MAMA BEAR AND SHES NOT AFRAID OF YOUR FAT Arse!!!! ILL KICK IT SO HARD YOULL WISH YOU WERE NEVER A SPERM!!!! HERE IS MY PAGE HATE ON MY STUFF AND ILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND SHOW YOU WANT A CREEPYPASTA FAN CAN DO TO A COUWORD LIKE YOU! YOU JUST SIT THERE ON YOUR FAT Arse HATING ON PEOPLE TO MAKE THEN crapY ABOUT THEMSELFS. JUST TO MAKE YOURSELF FEEL GOOD?!?!?!? I HOPE YOU LOOK AT EVILE SKYLER SHES MY CREEPYPASTA CHARACTER! LETS SEE IF YOU HAVE THE guts TO TRASH HER*grabs your shirt and poles you close to face* I will worn you now and only now if you do I will hunt you down and rip that heart out of your chest with my bear hands.

    MachNovember 20, 2013 at 9:24 PM

    Do you actually have bear hands? 'Cause you should probably get that checked with a doctor or something.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 12:54 AM

    The way she types she most certainly does have actual paws...

    HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 1:59 AM

    I thought five year olds weren't allowed on the internet.

    Some one needs a time out in the naughty corner until they can get over their little temper tantrum Smile

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 12:23 PM

    They posted it here too.

    AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:11 PM

    Hurhurhurhurhurhur (<-- That's actually how i laugh). I can't stop laughing about your bad grammar and abuse of Caps locks/Shift + Hold. Like, did you write this with your toes? And >bear hands. I don't even think that was a spelling error.

    - Mr. Eleven

    HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 1:52 AM

    Dear sweet pasta of finn the human!

    White knights, White knights EVERYWHERE.

    Can you anon whiners even TRY to understand what's going on here? The point of this site is to poke fun at the stupid "original" ocs that people make. TRUST ME, when you look back on all the crap you made 10 years ago, you'll be MIGHTY embarrassed at how cliche, stupid and unrealistic it is. You guys need to stop crying, get a GRIP and perhaps take to mind some of the comments they make. Seriously, GROW UP.

    BOO-HOO SOMEONE WROTE NEGATIVE COMMENTS ABOUT MY TOTES ORIGINAL OC!!!!YOU GUYS ARE SOO MEEAN OMG!!111!

    Alla'ya'll anon commenters are going on about how the whyfags team doesn't have lives, and yet YOU people are here WHINING, WHITE-KNIGHTING and COMPLAINING about how butt hurt you or your friend are over some generally lax critque (compared to some stuff you'll get in the REAL WORLD, woooo!) Gee, sounds like a bunch of immature hypocrites to me.

    Get a grip, and try to improve yourself, for the good of yourself AND EVERYONE ELSE.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 8:14 PM

    ...Hey Hollie?

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    SHUT UP!

    HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 5:36 AM

    Oh dear, did I hurt the widdle anon's feewings? :3 Take your own advice, you ninny.

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:32 PM

    Awww, looks like someone's trying to act tough :3

    No one gives a rat's hiney what you think. If people hate this blog, they have the right to hate it. The arsehole lowlifes of Whyfags have no right to review people's OCs without even asking them in the first place. If they want their OCs to be reviewed, they would ASK for it. But, someday they would look back on their OC and would remake it to make them look better. So really, they don't need from arseholes like the Whyfags cast.

    But, I guess you wouldn't understand it because you're too blind to see it. Smile

    Hollie, go mess yourself. If no, then I don't know what to tell ya sweetheart. :3

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:20 PM

    If they have no right to review, then you have no right to hate without asking if they want hate.

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    Wasn't talking to you~ ^_^

    HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:36 PM

    Anon 1- trying to act tough? A hypocrite now, are we? :3 At least I don't hide behind the "anon" sign like you do. If you're sooo tough and cool, why don't you crawl out behind your low life self and face things like an adult? Wink

    Guess what? If you post it on the internet, everyone has the right to say something about it WHETHER you AGREE or NOT. You can't stop that because that's just how it works. I'd rather be blind than an ignorant white knight like you Wink

    Also, no one gives a rat's derriere about what I think, huh? I think you do, since 1) you're replying 2) you're all up in my face about my opinion and 3) insulting me and acting like the generally immature whiners that populate the internet.

    Grow a spine, and learn some manners. Until you do, stay off the internet and go back to kindergarten Smile

    Cheers, Sweetie Wink

    HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:50 PM

    Also, good response Anon 2 ;D

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:12 AM

    Anan A. I fail to grasp your logic, as it is as broken as Meta Knight is powerful in Super Smash Bros.

    - Mr. Eleven

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Whoever did this is the real maggot

    ShrekNovember 21, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    Oh, Donkeh, looook at all these flaming comments on your fanceh typewriter! I kahn't even imagine why they're upset when the trooooth is shown. I hope they never show up in mah swamp, because I'll be sure tue show them tha troo horror that is ogre madness!

    LOOK AT ME DONKEH! LOOOK AT ME! I NEED YOUR ATTENTION TUE SURVIVE!

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 1:51 PM

    Are you high?

    DonkeyNovember 22, 2013 at 3:15 PM

    For bray sake shrek, I can't even escape you online, everywhere I go it's donkey this. AND DONKEY THAT!

    bray OFF SHREK HOW DO YOU KEEP FINDING ME?!

    BleedmanloverNovember 21, 2013 at 8:16 PM

    Lick my boot

    AnonymousJanuary 3, 2014 at 10:11 PM

    But why?

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 9:12 PM

    The thing about these guys are that they're somehow right. Really, people if you're going to get mad at them because they're criticizing a creepy pasta OC. Don't even try. Sure you guys got mad for them making fun of others' OCs. But really. "CRITICIZING" in some critiques, you just HAD to be rude and point out things. The thing here, is that they're at least being humorous at some point. Also making the others' stories logical.

    EVEN THIS HELPED ME WITH WRITING CREEPY PASTA STORIES. Funny thing. They at least helped me realize, that some crap people add aren't even braying necessary. ALL YOU NEED IS A STORY. AND A brayING STORY BASED PICTURE. DONE. Also psychic powers and such. No. This helped me realize, that the stories I have written are crappy. I'll admit. And for the others' who got their OCs criticized. Just take the demn advice. DO NOT brayING TAKE IT SERIOUSLY. Yours may not have been complimented. Cause if you're just looking for compliments. Well.. you'll have to be thinking about better crap.. Good bye.

    AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    People on here lack grammar and proper spelling. I lost several IQ points just to read half of these comments. First of all, if you don't like this blog, then leave. How braying hard is it to simply click away from this blog page and carry on with your merry ways?! Do you guys literally look up this blog, see their "de-grading" post of actually horrible OCs / CPs? Do you guys overlook the CONSTRUCTIVE (note: HELPFUL) criticism that they type at the end of every post?! Also, don't give me the "Oh, well, have you tried to make an OC / CP? I bet you haven't.", because I actually have made both, and they're well-made, since I have a difficult time making a joke Mary Sue. I just haven't made a full background story for them since I'm busy and I don't have enough ideas to make a full, well thought, good background story for each of them. I may be coming off as a perfect, righteous wench who thinks she's better than everyone else but really just needs to come off of her high and mighty horse. That's not true, though, as I'm only here to point out the oblivious facts that are no doubt on here. I don't care if I'm going to get yelled at across the internet, because that tells me you hate the truth that's been handed to you on a platinum braying platter of the internet. Good night, everyone, and merry braying early Thanksgiving! Have a fantastic holiday. (P.S. I love your work Whyfags!!!! PaperMoon16 to lazy to sign-in, signing out.)

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 1:09 AM

    Suck my fiction, Anon.

    Suck their doorknobs if you love this crappy blog so much. Very Happy Lololol

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 5:41 AM

    You should suck your own toes if it'll keep your mouth shut. Get off the blog if you don't like it Smile

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:28 PM

    It doesn't really surprise me that dirtbags like you would enjoy crappy blogs like this Smile

    Kiss my site, Anon. Smile

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:36 PM

    You should go blast yourself and get over the fact that just because you think this blog is crappy because it's about bad characters doesn't mean it it is nor that everyone who enjoys it is a dirtbag. That title belongs to me.

    ~dirtbag

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:29 PM

    Like I said dirt, kiss my site ^_^

    HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    You're angry because we're not, Anon Wink Get over yourself.

    AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:16 PM

    What do you guys have with smileys and genitalia? Like seriously, that's gross.

    - Mr. Eleven

    MachNovember 22, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    The amount of sarcastic smileys in this comments section is astounding.

    DannyGreenNovember 22, 2013 at 3:50 PM

    Sure it is ;D

    AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:53 PM

    I'm amazed. This post has more comments than the "Kaite" review.

    AnonymousJanuary 9, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    Oh flame wars...

    Aren't they just magnificent and enjoyable

    (If you didn't get sarcasm, don't start the flame war)

    AnonymousJanuary 19, 2014 at 7:47 PM

    leave grace the he|| alone

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM

    Nah.

    - Mr. Eleven

    AnonymousDecember 27, 2015 at 12:04 AM

    I see a white-knight.

    AnonymousFebruary 14, 2014 at 4:17 PM

    I absolutely found this funny! These ocs are just horrible. This blog actually helped me with my creepypastas. I wish that you guys would critize my friend's oc, Death. Death is actually worst than all these ocs combined.

    AnonymousApril 14, 2014 at 2:35 PM

    I just wonder how his father looks if sharpjaw is so hamgoddemn beautifull !! Smile

    AnonymousApril 18, 2014 at 3:25 PM

    (excuse my english, it's not my native language)

    Holy crap, tick off a half-arsed writer/"artist" and his/her teenage fans will come bawwing and screaming like an horde of retarded orcs.

    These characters are crap. The idea of creepypasta, was to create scary stories; not writing the Twilight of horror fiction. Think of all the great monsters in horror. From Pennywise, to Hannibal Lecter, Nosteratu, Pyramid Head, the Cenobites or even Godzilla, Cthulhu and Cloverfield. All of them are supposed to evoke a feeling of dread, of feeling helpless and cornered by an unnatural intelligence or presence.

    These OCs are not scary at all. They are power fantasies, stupid Mary Sues from teenager kids who think gore is the crap. Kids who feel bad because daddy doesn't let them get at tattoo, dress in black leather or do some heavy make-up. Stupid teenagers going through the "angst is kawaii" phase...

    Again, look at that Jeff the Killer loser... he's pretty much Sasuke Uchiha looking like the unholy lovechild of Jack Skellington and L from Death Note.

    Get this crap straight... Jeff the Killer is the worst thing that ever happened to creepypasta. You're a lousy writer or creator if your idea is going for a character that looks like your average anime recolor, behaves like the military squirrel from Happy Tree Friends, and has a retarded name related to violence or a mental condition. Jeez, kids... if you want to express your angst and mental problems killing something... go play a rogue in World of Warcraft, go full berserk in Call of Duty or something like that. But stop clogging the internet with unoriginal, Mary Sue projections of how you think you look like inside and how much do you want the world to suffer because "you're depressed and somehow, life has been unfair to you".

    You're not the next Tim Burton, Stephen King or Takashi Miike.

    You end up looking like idiots such as Rob Liefeld, that wench from Twilight, Nickolaus Pacione or those morons who make Crossed.

    AnonymousApril 24, 2014 at 10:43 PM

    Aw~

    Look at all the beautiful butt hurt~

    I have a character I created in relation to creepypasta.

    I know what is good about him, and I know all of the flaws in both story and design.

    If it were reviewed poorly here, I may be disheartened at first, but I would not act like a fool and yell at the people who run this blog.

    Actually, I would be glad that flaws that I had missed would have been relieved to me so I could improve my character/story.

    As an artist you must learn to handle praise, hate, and constructive criticism.

    I love constructive criticism.

    People may put their heart and soul into a creation but that does not make it a master piece, that does not even necessarily mean it is any good at all.

    I think everyone in the comment section needs to calm themselves and act a bit more maturely rather than yelling at everyone you speak with.

    I found this blog today. At first I wasn't sure I would like it for the reasons most are offended.

    However those who run the blog make valid points and are not simply bashing things.

    If I used blogspot I would follow these guys, or whatever it is you do here.

    Keep up the interesting work~

    AnonymousMay 23, 2014 at 2:19 AM

    You guys show some good points, BUT- a LOT of people put all the creepypastas together into one huge group. There are many people who have made comics, pictures, stories, everything. I think it's okay to put them all together into one, but hey, that's my opinion. I'm not going to try to argue with anyone about it. I also think it's okay to make a CP OC, but again, my opinion. Keep up the good work guys!

    AnonymousMay 30, 2014 at 10:00 PM

    WHOO! I made it through all the comments, and STILL have some popcorn left! Anyone want some? It's extra butter!

    Pheonix Motherbraying WrightJuly 9, 2014 at 4:54 AM

    Dude, holy crap, it took me an hour to read this whole thing. Of course I stopped and tried reading the comments but I gave up around the fifth white knight. Anyhow I was surprised to see there was not one redeemable OC, usually when I read these rants and cluster reviews you find at least one that gets a C, or a B. I've only been reading your blog recently but it's really been entertaining to say the least. So thanks, I guess

    AnonymousOctober 27, 2014 at 8:47 AM

    Holy bray! It's Phoenix megablasting Wright! I loved you in the video games!

    nocturnalWallflowerAugust 18, 2014 at 12:33 PM

    I... Just, wow. So much rage. I now love this blog for all eternity.

    AnonymousDecember 29, 2014 at 8:58 PM

    This made me laugh so hard I can't even

    Can I send one of my OCs in to critique?

    DannyGreenJanuary 2, 2015 at 2:50 AM

    Sure. If it's actually worth critiquing

    AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:26 AM

    Now it's just me wondering why everyone is so relieved to be at the bottom of the comment section. It wan't even tiring. Yes, it was long, it was repetitive and it was annoying. But i'm not relieved.

    -Mr. Eleven

    Stott InMadMarch 2, 2015 at 6:36 AM

    All I see are characters that clearly have no understanding of what It means to be horrifying. No disrespect to the authors but how is it suppose to be scary. These characters have potential but their flaw = They live in the shadow of the classics. They can't survive on their own.

    AnonymousMarch 10, 2015 at 9:43 AM

    Whoa, so many hate comments. Why don't you just take this as a lesson to improve making CP OCs? It's a critique after all (a rather harsh one if you ask me, but still funny and hilarious). Well, at least these guys are being honest (rather than saying good thing in front and bad thing in back)

    (Sorry for the bad english, not speaking english as native language)

    AnonymousMarch 21, 2015 at 9:52 PM

    I just love those butthurt "liv dem aloun!" comments.

    AnonymousSeptember 19, 2015 at 2:41 PM

    could i possibly see an example of a good creepypasta oc im not being sarcastic or anything but im trying to figure out how to make a good one im thinking mine a white haired black eyed necromancer that wears a black cloak and bandages on her mouth and neck is kinda bad cause maybe its to unoriginal? or somthing.

    MachSeptember 23, 2015 at 9:34 PM

    Alright so lemme give my brief essay on why Creepypasta fancharacters will never be good.

    A horror (and by extension, creepypasta) villain is scary because you don't know what the bray they are, what they're capable of, or why they do their spooky stuff. A fancharacter is like the antithesis of that, because the story is always /about the character/ instead of actually being scary. Usually these stories fall more under "body horror" or "torture porn" which isn't actually scaring anyone, just making them uncomfortable and maybe causing them to lose their appetite.

    Short version: A story about how a spooky kid had a spooky childhood and then died in some spooky woods in a spooky way only to be resurrected as a spooky demon? It isn't actually spooky.

    UnknownNovember 26, 2015 at 8:42 PM

    Can i request you to review my oc Maddie? I mean its terrible but i'm trying to learn how terrible my oc is.

    Chica the final girlNovember 26, 2015 at 8:45 PM

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    MachNovember 27, 2015 at 8:01 AM

    I can see the things you linked, and I want to confirm that it is in fact terrible. There's nothing I can say about the character that Danny didn't already clearly elaborate on in the body of the above post.

    In particular, incorporating as many Creepypastas into your OC as possible is a bad idea. In fact, as mentioned in this post, just don't incorporate ANY existing creepypastas into your OC. It's stupid.

    Chica the final girlNovember 27, 2015 at 12:11 PM

    Okay that's very helpful.

    AnonymousJanuary 12, 2016 at 12:56 AM

    Let me just say all of you who "Defend" these steaming piles of crap also known as Creepypasta Ocs. Your idiots, who should rethink your lives.

    I love this, and want to see more. Keep up the amazing work. And to anybody who bashes my comment. buzz off.


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